tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5191202267854919416.post6675881924693218946..comments2023-08-20T08:59:05.893-06:00Comments on Writer, Cogitator, Recovering Ranch Girl: First ParagraphsTamarahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06986544384594087203noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5191202267854919416.post-31529349946179193932010-07-22T10:25:56.786-06:002010-07-22T10:25:56.786-06:00Yes! Isn’t it simply the hardest paragraph of the ...Yes! Isn’t it simply the hardest paragraph of the whole dang thing? <br /><br />I agree with your choices. Isn’t it amazing how they are doing nothing but describing simple actions, but ripples expand from it into your mind, and it immediately grips you?<br /><br />Thanks Brad! I hope you’ve gotten past the auxillary writing to the fun stuff.Tamarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06986544384594087203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5191202267854919416.post-6118473496273235582010-07-22T10:06:16.605-06:002010-07-22T10:06:16.605-06:00I like all of those, but The English Patient, Lone...I like all of those, but The English Patient, Lonesome Dove, and the Faulkner are my favorites. I suppose I’m attracted to the strong physicality of those. Nice topic. If there’s any part of my novel that I remain frustrated with, it’s that first paragraph.<br /><br />Nice digs here!Brad Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14303095673203409777noreply@blogger.com